Thursday, November 27, 2008

"Last Night..."--Short Tale #2



" I woke up this morning with a smile on my face...I didn't even dare to open up my eyes!...
It all felt like a dream...A dream from what I didn't want to wake up...
I could still feel the taste of your kisses on my lips...
The warm of your body against mine...
The touch of your hands on my skin...
I could still hear you whispering in my ears how much you love me...
I wanted more! More of it!...More of you!...
I turned to hold you against me...But you weren't there!...
I try not to panic...
I take a deep breath, dress up my robe and look for you around the house...
There's no sign of you...Just a couple of glasses and an empty wine bottle on the table...That's all that was left...
I look around for a note or something from you!...My heart beat increases madly and I felt like I'm choking!...
NO!!!Why did you do that?!
Where did I go wrong with you?!
Why you had to leave me like that?...
I pick up my cell phone desperate for a text message...But there's nothing!...No signs of you!...
My trembling fingers dial your number...But I can't get through...
I break down in tears...
I hate you!!!!
I hate all about you!...
I hate the way you look at me!...
I hate the way you smile!...
I hate your male perfume!...
I hate the way you talk!...
I hate the touch of your hands!...
I hate the way you make love to me!...
But most of all, I hate my self for loving you so much!...
The doorbell rings...
I can hardly stand on my legs, but I get up from the floor and walk towards the door...
It's a delivery...For me...
The most amazing flower bouquet I've ever seen!...
It has a card on it:
«You look so beautiful when you're sleeping.
I had to fight myself to not wake you up and make love to you again...
Thanks for the magical night.
Let's have dinner tonight.I'll pick you up at 8pm.
Love you »"



11 comments:

The New Mom on the Blog said...

This is Sexy x 100!!!! Wwooooo....

Tammy said...

WOW!!! That is really good!

Lapa37 said...

Great stuff makes me feel all sexy and hott.

karla artes said...

olá deves ter tido ca um susto
kando nao o viste ao teu lado,
mas as flores compensaram o susto.
so amor no ar,que sejas muito feliz
bjs
bom fim de semsna
karla

Juliana RW said...

wow....you are excellent :D

Have a nice weekend...

Petula said...

Wow! Who wrote that? Very nice and reflective of what a lot of think or have thought.

Shireen Loh said...

hey, no worries Sandra, I'm just not following anyone's blog at the moment :-) Trying to clear up my blog page. And am thinking of possibly a new domain. So will have to wait and see if that happens.

Fotos da Lurdes said...

Wow Sandra não sabia desta tua veia novelistica . Sim senhora tens jeito. Wow Sandra how romantic novel.very well done. Mom loves you.Xoxo

Kellan said...

This was so great - I loved it!! I thought it was real - loved it! Was it real?

Have a great weekend - Kellan

Toni said...

That is good! Very captivating!

Crazy Working Mom said...

Nice job! I was desperate to read the ending.